Review: Little Girls by by Ronald Malfi

22891406When Laurie was a little girl, she was forbidden to enter the room at the top of the stairs. It was one of many rules imposed by her cold, distant father. Now, in a final act of desperation, her father has exorcised his demons. But when Laurie returns to claim the estate with her husband and ten-year-old daughter, it’s as if the past refuses to die. She feels it lurking in the broken moldings, sees it staring from an empty picture frame, hears it laughing in the moldy greenhouse deep in the woods…

At first, Laurie thinks she’s imagining things. But when she meets her daughter’s new playmate, Abigail, she can’t help but notice her uncanny resemblance to another little girl who used to live next door. Who diednext door. With each passing day, Laurie’s uneasiness grows stronger, her thoughts more disturbing. Like her father, is she slowly losing her mind? Or is something truly unspeakable happening to those sweet little girls?



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My Thoughts:

I received this title from NetGalley in exchange for an honest review.

I lifted this book off of The Book Dame -who loved it- and it became my first ever adult ghost story. I anticipated Little Girls with an edgy curiosity, expecting to be scared or at least a little creeped-out, but although there were plenty of gritty scenes that made me uncomfortable, nothing had scared me like I thought it would.

 Laurie, the main character of the story was portrayed very well. In fact, you got a good idea of who everyone in the family was. I was impressed by how the light tone of Ted and Susan didn’t subtract from the dark tone of the book. Reading Little Girls, more often than not my mood could be described as “numb.” Even in the scenes dictated by Ted’s lighthearted banter with his daughter, I felt Laurie’s perspective of an outsider looking onto something that hardly fit in with her life. Her relationship with Susan was not really that of a mother and daughter that loved each other, but more of a stepmother who feels like an intrusion upon a daughter and her father. This I enjoyed, if not with a little sadness.

Another remarkable thing in Little Girls was the imagery. I had very clear views of what was going on inside the novel, particularly during the darker scenes: peeking through a tall wooden fence, shadows passing under doorways, and especially the last scene with Abigail, which I won’t reveal due to spoilers. Let me just say that it was very well written in a way that it was easy to picture. You know how sometimes you read the sentence (for the millionth time) “I let out a breath I didn’t know I was holding” and your mind just kind of skips over it and doesn’t really picture it? Yea, none of that in Little Girls. Every scene was vivid and well written.

It may have been a well written book with good characters, but I often found the plot lackluster. There were a lot of over-described actions and when I look back on the events I realize that nothing remarkable really happened until the end. There were some key points, but the beginning and middle of Little Girls seemed like completely different books from the end. Had the whole book had the plot of the end with the high points of the beginning and middle, I definitely would have liked little girls more.

Overall, Little Girls had a lot of strong standpoints, but I just don’t think it was my thing. It is my first horror story and I was expecting a little more creepiness, (although there was one scene where I got the level of thrills I desired, at the end with Abigail, but it was only one scene) but if you think this may be your  cup of tea, check out The Book Dame‘s review for some more insight.

Three Stars

Three Stars

8 thoughts on “Review: Little Girls by by Ronald Malfi

  1. I am not a fan of horror books, although I read them now and then. The cover and blurb sound really creepy, so I am surprised how you mention there is only one really creepy scene. I have the feeling that with horror books I expect contstant creepiness or am on the lookout for the creepiness, while in fact there is still a lot of story beside that. Sounds like the descriptions are well done, although that’s too bad the plot was a bit slow. Great review!


    • Thanks! I don’t generally do horror- as I’ve said this was my first! I do look forward to more in the future, though. But as for the CLOSE future, I’ll be reading a romance or YA.


  2. Woah, that cover really freaks me out haha. Great review! It sounds interesting but I can’t stomach horror and ghost stories. I have a hard time watching them much less reading them where my imagination can run wild. I wouldn’t be able to sleep for days haha.


  3. Too bad that you didn’t like this as much as I did. Maybe you weren’t creeped out because I built up the creep factor so much before you read it. I am usually more scared by books like this, where something is lurking just beneath, rather than books that are outwardly gory. Great review, Danni. Thank you for the mention, doll.


    • Of course! Gore doesn’t really scare me, what really freaks me out is insanity or straight-out fairytale horror like people without faces or voodoo. The Brother’s Grimm movie gave me nightmares =P


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